snappy in dress blues hovering at attention marine dragonfly
via 1919 —
a bird lacks a mate he becomes a twitterer of three line verses
via 1920 —
long beaked ravens darting and looping god embroidering
via 1921 —
a buddha dies a fawn is born a resurrection
via 1922 —
Moonglow- I press my dreams Against my pillow. #haiku#senryu#verse
Bruce Jewett: after the dragonfly in dress blues, and embroidering ravens, the work-a-morning world of tympanic car doors deserves attention, too! Good on you, BCJ!
the morning drum sound
car doors slamming shut
off to work they go
Only another Marine scoff-snuffie could see this word-picture and know: here be trouble. Great’un, thou good and generous Lance-Poet!
snappy in dress blues
hovering at attention
devine sew-ing machines. ‘Tis a season of weaving and wending for many of our feathered buthers and cousinsand their distaff consorts, no and to-be. Some of the finches downright astounding pilots and dare-gods (much more guffaw-provoking then devils. Thanks, Bruce. “god embroidering” a gem.
long beaked ravens
darting and looping