“If Robin Williams” Tanka 631


If Robin Williams

is ‘The Late’ does that make all

the rest of us early?

 

Get me to the show on time!

That’s why suicide’s so rude*!

 

  • (aside from the one-count too far last line of the haiku form already discussed in “If Robin Williams,” I have to report another argument ‘twixt the several me’s involved in this project: seems instead of leaving bad enough alone I found scribbled in the preceding notebook page the following tail-ed “…why suicide is No Out!”  I picked the one less offensive.)

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